I really enjoyed this poem, you are very talented. In the 7th line and the last, you used the word "still" in a way that I do not understand. Is that my lack of knowledge or a typo? I'll have to look the word up to get all its definitions. Anyway, judging by the quality of your poem, I'm at fault. Keep writing! I hope to run across more of your work.
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