What do you think of the lyrics I just wrote? (PLEASE ANSWER)?

I really, really liked this. It made me think of my ex. This is an amazing song and I would definitally love to hear it if you sing it and put music to it. For a title you can name it after the person that hurt you, i.e. Holly's Song. (that's what I do when I don't know what to name a song, I just name it after the person who inspired it). Overall it truely is an amazing song. I love it. Keep up the good work! :D